Off Topic: 'Letter in November': The Joyful Plath
Sylvia Plath’s ‘Letter in
November’ is my favourite of her poems; one that I love in a body of work
that is remarkable considering its limited period of creation.
The poem is defined by the same intangible and unstable narration as her most haunting and vengeful poems, yet it presents something closer to mania. Its abruptness and guise of simplicity is what makes it such a standout for me, with the charming and confident phrasing of the poem comfortably compartmentalised in my memory, just as Plath dramatically truncates the poem to convey the excitement and heightened emotion of her poetic voice. It begins:
The poem is defined by the same intangible and unstable narration as her most haunting and vengeful poems, yet it presents something closer to mania. Its abruptness and guise of simplicity is what makes it such a standout for me, with the charming and confident phrasing of the poem comfortably compartmentalised in my memory, just as Plath dramatically truncates the poem to convey the excitement and heightened emotion of her poetic voice. It begins:
Love, the world
Suddenly turns, turns color
and then trails off with ‘It is
the Arctic,’ the description of which bridges the stanzas of this incoherent,
almost stream-of-consciousness style narration. Plath clearly marvels in the
joyful bluntness of the poem with the qualifying ‘turns color’ playfully
pretending to elaborate, but only providing an increasing number of blank
contrasts. The metaphor of the switching on
of colour is also rather obvious, but the phrasing is so simple and yet so far
from normal syntax that it just begs for repetition. It seems essential by its own brute force. Plath
may be said to be the poetic equivalent of style over substance, but of course this phrase
is meaningless and almost always problematic. The poem is about being happy.
That’s it. So, what? I often hear the phrase applied to people like Zack
Snyder, and I find the implication that his style is in any way interesting
quite insulting. Ultimately style can have its own substance, and Snyder’s
images become muddy and meaningless. Plath proves that simplicity can convey
volumes.
The use of absolutes is also
interesting, as this simple wordplay and use of contrasts can be threatening
for Plath. This is suggested in her poem “Wuthering Heights”, in which her
unease is conveyed by the description of herself as:
the one upright
Among the horizontals
In this poem, on the other hand, she
is controlling of nature, which is seen as a meaningless aesthetic symbol as
she is ‘Squelching and squelching through the beautiful red.’
There are probably very few words
more despised for their meaninglessness than ‘beautiful’, and the poem
acknowledges this through the use of ‘stupidly happy,’ suggesting a voice aware of the improbability of this simplicity. As well as her dark subjects, I
suspect the apparent simplicity of some of her poems is what leads imitators to
so poorly mimic Plath’s writing. Yet, isn't it the subtle juxtapositions of control and mystery that makes this seemingly quaint poem rather strange and somewhat haunting?
The final two lines of the poem,
The irreplaceable
Golds bleed and deepen, the
mouths of Thermopylae
are quite astonishing in a strange way. I
mean, for a poet as visceral and tangible as Plath, this mythical image is so
vague and obscure, yet it becomes vivid simply through the filtered-down and
manufactured cultural imaginary of Thermopylae. Indeed, if ancient
civilisations were to be characterised
by one colour, it would be gold.
The titular 'letter' is rarely acknowledged,
apart from the direct address of
Imagine it ----
My seventy trees
Holding their gold-ruddy balls
In a thick gray death-soup
Of course, we can ‘imagine it’,
and the succinctness is successful purely because of the universality of these
images. Note the use of ‘my,’ though; her
happiness has a distinct tie to the act of ownership. This control is tensely
insecure in an environment described in such indefinite terms. The present
tense of ‘bleed and deepen’ shows the moulding of colour, the strange
manipulation of objective fact that reaches its paramount in the insecure image of Thermopylae, which is proven and sustained, but ultimately
rather arbitrary, distant and chaotic. Equal to the despair in Plath’s work, there is a
godlike control and force that belies her rather tenuous relationship to the
physical world.
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